First Impression:
My eyes went to the face, to the hands, white part of left wing, down to the elbows, then over to the right wing. “What’s on the elbow?”
Composition:
Sky and wings too close in colour. Not enough contrast. May have been cropped to tight, but I don’t know what you may have been excluding on purpose. You didn’t include any notes on what you did taking the picture or post processing.
Subject:
Feel you met the challenge.
Technical:
Whites are blown and focus is soft. Nothing really sharp. Some contrast adjustment followed by some USM may have helped
Suggestions:
Don’t think the “sepia” effect works. May have been better in B/W, or original colour?
Summary:
Unfortunately, your statue doesn’t have a very high “interest” level. Post processing may not have been appropriate for this picture.
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