If you request a critique from the critique club, you should always fill out your 'Photographer's Comments' field when you submit your photo. When you don't include your own thoughts on the image, you can't really expect someone else to give their time and effort to give you a critique. It makes me think that you don't care enough about your own photo to take the time to post your thoughts on it...
This is an interesting photo, to say the least. Your creative use of lighting works very nicely by creating light/shadow detail. This photo, in my mind, doesn't emit any sense of comfort though. The contrasty light and darkness in the image create more tension for me than anything else...
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