If you request a critique from the critique club, you should always fill out your 'Photographer's Comments' field when you submit your photo. When you don't include your own thoughts on the image, you can't really expect someone else to give their time and effort to give you a critique. It makes me think that you don't care enough about your own photo to take the time to post your thoughts on it...
This image doesn't really require much of a critique. It scored well in the challenge.
I personally didn't care much for this image. The composition is rather uninteresting and there is a bit too much negative space in the frame for my personal taste. The overall idea is very interesting but I think you could have been more creative with the 'painting' :)