Nice shot, I really like the B&W here... However I would have cropped out the father's left shoulder. Hmm, now I look again, that would remove the nice white ribbon. :(
Composition: I would be tempted to crop the white bow at the left, the child is a little too centralised. Nice position of the father though.
Technical: Nice focus, but the shadow under the girl's chin and ear is a bit harsh. I may have tried reducing contrast and increasing brightness slightly.
Meets challenge: A bit iffy..
Overall impression: Nice documentary shot, but for me cropping it on the left might be an improvement.
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