The strong overhead light simply does not work for me. Had the model been a 'real' human (which I would have much preferred), the eyes would have been shadowed to the point of obscurity (as they are with the mannequin). A reflector or a fill light would help considerably in lighting the face. Also, I think more care should be taken with the background in relation to the models and his outfit - the sunglasses get almost totally lost in the dark bg - there isn't quite enough 'separation' there. Another thought about the bg - it would seem more 'professional' if picture frames in the background were _either_ removed before the shoot _or_ lit so that they looked like they were lieft in intentionally.
Another maniquin shot. I wonder, did the manager at Eddie Bauer mind you doing this? All kiddin' aside, I couldn't imagine this in GQ or Details. Technically it's pretty cool.....love the maniquin's ripped abs!