Great model (she's actually pretty and has up-to-date hair), good fashion (even accessories!) and fun setting. Works for me. Her top could have a bit more detail (it's a tad overexposed).
Whenever one uses a full real model in a fashion shoot, one has to be very careful to show both the fashion and the model in the proper way for the ad or fashion portrayed. Here is the good and bad with your risk: The good is that the models expression is good, her hands are in a pleasing position, just enough neck is showing to pass the muster with modeling in this position, and the background for the shot is interesting - although I am not sure how it fits in with the fashion. However, I do like the warehouse usage. The bad is that the top does not fit her bossum properly and hides what would have been a very fashionable belt and waist line, the jewelry is too much of a distraction, and the bottom half of both legs are not properly lit in the shot. Too dark. All in all though, it is a good and what I would call a first-time amateur fashion photographer shot, and still got decent points from me. Nice work.
Wish the crop wasn't so tight. Makes it seem like she's crammed in...but the clothes feel soft...perhaps more appropriate for an open feel with lots of space. Beautiful lighting and color.
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