Nice to be able to take the time to critique your image Riverside Expressway. It is not
The immediate impression is that this is an imposing picture. This is in a good way. As a veiwer I am dragged into the image, which is a good feeling.
The composition is good. It has pleasent leading lines, although the clash of these feels a little uncomfortable it is a nice challenge to the eyes and makes it interesting.
The lighting is lovely, and the colourisation used impressive, but you know that from the comments received.
To improve the votes: Not sure, I think this is a great image, and well deserving to be in the 80%.
Summary
YOU SHOULD BE PROUD. It is not your highest scoring, but it is great, and a challenge to be taken and processed.
If you would like to discuss the critique or have any comments feel free to PM me.