A snapshot of a cannon. Why?
Horizon doesn't seem to have been thought about. Why make it exactly level with the barrel of the cannon? This confuses what is presumably supposed to be the focal point of the photo.
Bad light, there are shadows on the cannon which takes away from the composition, and there is too much bright light on the wood.
It doesn't feel balanced compositionally. Although you've placed the cannon right up to the bottom-left corner which creates a nice leading line, the space to the right of the cannon feels odd. It might have worked better with more space to the right of the cannon.
No detail in the sky.
Nothing seems to be using rule of thirds.
It's a photo of a cannon... unless I was a cannon geek, why should this interest me?
Sepia tones don't do much for me with this image, and it seems a bit low on contrast. |