If you request a critique from the critique club, you should always fill out your 'Photographer's Comments' field when you submit your photo. When you don't include your own thoughts on the image, you can't really expect someone else to give their time and effort to give you a critique. It makes me think that you don't care enough about your own photo to take the time to post your thoughts on it...
The lighting on this image needs some help. The color tones are a little bland for my taste. I also think the composition is a little too tight overall, but I'm definitely no source on this type of photography. The image also appears to be slightly soft. Some additional sharpness would be excellent in this photo.
The facial expression of your model aren't helping this shot and her eyes are too heavily lined, giving an overall harshness to this rather than sensual or edgy fashion.
Love the concept, and the composition is good, even if the crop seems a little tight. The light is quite harsh, though, and she looks exceedingly bored.
great coloring of the eyes, when you look at the picture, the thing that pops out are her beautiful eyes. like the way the picture comes together, when i look at the picture, reminds me of prom.
very well done shot...... wonderful model and her expression is great - she wears it well is a phrase that comes to mind. and you photographed it well too
Great photo! The colors are rich & details are crisp. At first I didn't like the lip color, but then I realized her lips match the ribbon. Sensual without over-doing it. Great job!
I don't think it's against the rules to "touch up." I would have elimated the spots on her chest or had her use some cover up makeup. Good shot overall!
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