If you request a critique from the critique club, you should always fill out your 'Photographer's Comments' field when you submit your photo. When you don't include your own thoughts on the image, you can't really expect someone else to give their time and effort to give you a critique. It makes me think that you don't care enough about your own photo to take the time to post your thoughts on it...
This photo seems to have received a mediocre score in the greater shceme of the challenge. It has no real issues other than being a little flat in tonality. This particular composition is a bit stereotypical these days. It doesn't really strike me as unique or flattering to your subject in any way. It doesn't create much of a mood or emotion in me as I view it.