I think having the model pose with both her feet behind the railing, up on her tippy toes leaning forward would better convey the "expecting" concept.
I really like how the teal shutters really pop here.
I like the background but I find that it isn't suited to the fashion that is being presented. It is almost jarring to me. Her pose seems unnatural to me. She doesn't look comfortable with her leg sticking through the bars like that.
Wow, this one could be really good with some advanced editing. I know you weren't allowed, but a little vignetting would really set this image up well I think. What a beautiful model. The lighting on her face is superb. I wish it was a little more sharp however. Nice going.
It looks like you used on camera flash, which I am not super fond of, but you seemed to get everything else right. Location is great! posing is ok and model is good. It looks like you did the best with what you had avaible to you. One of the better shots I have seed so far. 7
Great concept, good posing, and definately something I'd expect to see in a fashion magazine - except for the pole growing out of the top of her head. This could have been avoided by simply moving her a couple of feet to her left. Remember, always watch your background.
The white awning is a distraction, but aside from that, very nicely done. She could also lose the huge earrings, but I like the expression. It is like she is saying "Is that him?" as she looks around the corner. Waiting for her date or lover. Nicely portrayed by a lovely model. Very good balance, and one not easily portrayed using a full real model in a fashion shoot. Good work.
Composition: 5 - Wish you could've gotten rid of that canvas awning.
Technical: 7
Creativity: 7
Appeal: 8
Challenge: 6
Overall Score: 7 - (weighted - NOT a calculated average)
Great job!
Note: The comments given are either my honest opinion, or just meant to be humorous (maybe that's one and the same). They didn't cost you anything so feel free to disregard. ;-)
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