Composition: 4 - a bit uninteresting, the shoes look a bit worn / not new
Technical: 4 - some of the highlights look too hot / blown
Creativity: 4
Appeal: 3
Challenge: 5
Overall Score: 4 - (weighted - NOT a calculated average)
I like your idea, but for some reason, I can't explain (and this may not make any sense) your composition feels forced...or...stuffy...something about it looks...rigid. Sorry I can't put it in better terms.