First Impression:
Very busy. My eyes kept searching for a point of interest. Then…what a lot of AC units!
Composition:
Very busy. May have been cropped to tight. Move back or a wider lens would have put the building in more context with it’s surroundings, with out losing the “greed” feel.
Subject:
May have fit under “Gluttony” better that “Greed.” Don’t know what the building was used for. Good eyes for seeing such a monster usage of AC units.
Technical:
Focus is soft and picture a bit grainy. 800 ISO would not have helped with the grain. Sky is blown as well. Green light creates a hot spot. Given the drab colours, and the lighting conditions, a B&W version may have been more effective.
Composition: 5
Technical: 5
Creativity: 5
Appeal: 3
Challenge: 1 - The term "Shoehorn" comes to mind ;-)
Overall Score: 3 - (weighted - NOT a calculated average)