lighting is off here, too many shadows on their faces, losing too much eye detail and makign the girl on the left look a bit like a raccoon with the shadows under her eyes :(
dont like how her fingers are cropped randomly
background is distracting to say the least (especially right-hand side with the DUI packages, etc)
Home Bakery sign is a bit distracting too.
...I get a jist of where and what they could be doing, but could you show it?
(Note: I think the excessive Valentine's Day garb dates and destroys the photo and is definitely distracting. I'd try reshooting? You could get something...)