I know about 60's second hand, but this photograph is my idea of a Coffe Bar. The subject, however colorful, is not harmonic, the checkerboard in the floor doesn't fit with the psicodelic curves, I think that's why I don't like the photo that much.
A good shot. However, there may have been more interesting shots if you could get closer and fill the frame with one or two of the items in this picture
The colors here are nice, but there's really nothing here that captures my eye. Might want to pick somthing specific, say the jukebox, and compose your image around that.
Poor lighting: the reflections of the flash are horrrible, and I think the white balance has become confused - see how orange the white floor tiles are. Nice enough subject, but it needs natural light to stop it flattening out like this.
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