I love the composition and expression youy captured but i feel you overdid it when adjusting the color. I can accept the red in the hair, but the Very Yellow skin tones are turning me off
Great idea, nice elements of person, dogtags, and letter, and good expression. Would be better with less processing, better midtones, and not-so-blown-out white letter.
This is very powerful! Your processing is perfect for the mood you are conveying in this photo. If ever a photo said "Broken". . .this is it! Very well done!