not already broken, but then again, neither was mine. i like the texture on the bottom surfcace, and i like the shadow and light hitting the top, it's a very nice contrast. the color of the orange is perfect, and true to the real thing.
I really loved the idea here, but I feel your contrast is way too high. I think the highlight on the upper right takes away from the focal point of the 'busted' area. I really think you should give it another go, however, it is a really great idea.