This has so much potential, but you have not given yourself even half a chance.
Lets look at the background - too much going on, too much detail. Stop down to f2.8 or f4 to throw all that background out of focus.
Next lets look at the light - bland and flat. Come back at dawn or dusk and get some sideways directional light to pick out the shapes.
Composition - the main object is placed dead centre, remember the rule of thirds and look for an angle where you can make use of it.
Last - that hint of blue keeps dragging my eye over the hill. Place your camera and viewpoint so that you do not have these distractions. Hide it behind one of the upright pieces. |