Interesting image. There are a lot of elements here and I'm not quite sure which is supposed to have my attention. The result is that nothing does. The OOF object to the right is really distracting so maybe it would have better been left out do you think?
I've read your title twice and at least for me, it's more abstract than your image :-) I like the left two-thirds of your image. It's the blurred right third that I find detracting.