dof makes this a bit too abstract. the lighting on the right is a bit too strong. as an entry, this comes across as though you found something broken and zoomed in on it. you got to close to it for the viewer to get anything from it that would keep their attention.
as a side note, challenge entries are not counted towards your portfolio space, you should be submitting entries as large as possible, at least 640px on the longest side (this is 550), and as close to 150kb as possible. |