I"m going to be very blunt about this photo...It's just plain good! Very good, as a matter of fact. Your focus is right on and I like the duotones as well. Could use a little more contrast, but still a good shot nonetheless. I also really like the contrasting curves and lines and the viewpoint you have taken is very interesting. You can' t really tell if you are looking down or up at the subject. Very good abstract...keep up the good work!
Intresting lines. I do however feel that the viewpoint could be changed to serve this focal point a little better. Lighting is a bit harsh. I would personally back away and Turn slightly to the left or right and put the wheel at one of the four quadrants. That woudl dramatically change the composition and effectively please the eye a little bit more. You are on to something here.
Interesting photo and poor title. "Pandering" in the title is sure to get you in trouble. I think this is the beginning of a good photo. The lighting isn't working.. looks like an on cam flash probably. Natural lighting may not have been possible, and if so, maybe a different subject choice would have worked out better for you...
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