Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Looks like a person standing beside a character with big ears and a hat!
Composition:
Very monotone in terms of colour. Nothing of interest to catch your eye. Including more of you legs may have helped. The “shadow” dominates the image vs being a focal point of interest.
Subject:
You did capture your shadow, so you met the challenge. Unfortunately you didn’t capture your shadow in a very interesting setting
Technical:
Colours are flat, and the added blur softened any contrast you may have been able to create.
Summary:
After reviewing your portfolio, this is not one of you better pictures….
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