Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Eye keeps looking for a focus point. Eyes drawn to the frame of ice not the water.
Composition:
You may have cropped too tight. Majority of your picture is blurred
Subject:
Good eyes to see the interesting subject mater.
Technical:
Find there is a tab too much blue. DOF captures the ice well, and your shutter speed adds a nice blur to the water
Suggestions:
More depth of field to include some of the rocks may have made the picture more interesting. (ie your “Beauty in Motion”)
Summary:
Ice adds a very effective frame, but I think you need to modify the balance between “blur” and “in focus”
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