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The spotlight effect is very distracting, but given the amount of visual clutter visible in the background even with the vignetting this may have been the better alternative. The white flowers appear to be overexposed by the flash. Shooting this with a shallower DoF and placing the model's faces closer to the center of the frame would have improved this image.
Looks like a simple snapshot. The vignetting is very unecessary.
You got the couple, you got the subject, you got the potential. What you could have done is chosen a better setting, used a better light and not flash and closened up onto the kiss.