Ya gotta love guns! Ain't nothing better for shootin' stuff! The two cartriges alone don't offer much interest. I would suggest more dramatic lighting, more of an angle and possibly part of a shotgun in the background
I'm really interested to find out what the title means. The focus is good, DOF is great, light is about just right. Color and sharpness could maybe be a little better for me, but it's somewhat subjective - I can see the appeal in it.