Gave this a 4. Liked the concept and thought it had potential. Just needed to be bigger (640 width in this case) and, hard to discern, but possibly a nudge rotation up on the right.
This is a nice picture, I'm just afraid that this will be voted down because of the size, you should use the 640 pixels that we are allowed to use in challenges.
This might be a really good shot, but the size is stopping alot of people seeing it properly and reducing its impact. Try resizing to 640 and see what happens.