I would be interested to see how a landscape crop of this might look. As a portrait the two look a little too cramped, IMO. As perhaps sharpening it just a hair although I do like the soft focus.
The soft focus almost seems intentional, but because the neck of the girl on the right is in fairly sharp focus the softness throughout the rest of the image feels a bit amateurish rather than creative. The heavy makeup on the one model contrasts sharply with the lack thereof on the other girl. Since the bright red lipstick is the most prominent feature of the image, it would have been nice to have the focus centered there.
Interesting. I have a feeling this might get a few people upset. As for the shot itself, the softness is just a little too strong. It looks more like a lack of focu than softness.
Nice composition, but looks like a focus miss, as strands on neck seem to be the sharpest part of the image - were you too close for your camera/lens? Back up to the minimum focus distance, and crop in software.
Cute girls :) No way I could give this a high score though, I am too obsessed with image quality and just simply isn´t a great image from that standpoint, it´s just too badly out of focus and the colour tones too purple for my taste. Still gave this a 5 because I like the intimacy between them and the composition.