I'm not sure whether this is a wide-angle shot or if that's just an illusion due to the concentric canopy, but I find that the effect interferes with my enjoyment of the image. Using a shallower DoF would have helped to reduce the impact of the wide angle. The people seem a little more posed than I'd like; I think that a more relaxed shot of them focusing on each other rather than the camera would have been more interesting.
Or just good holidays? It would be love if they were kissing or looking at each other or something else, but not directly at the camera and teeling me: look how much fun we're having! 5
Not much saves this picture from being anything but a "snapshot." The content is acceptable for this challenge, but the execution doesn't offer anything.
Snapshot, but works well for topic. Would improve with better (less harsh) lighting, off center subject, no merge with top of woman's head, and without the man's arms jutting toward the camera.
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