This is so funny I think I'm going to send it to my mother.
LOL! <---- for about 2 minutes!
It's extra funny for me because I teach kids and they (being honest beyond a fault) always let me know that I am SOOOO FAT (probably a little less than your model, but not far off).
Some older ones also let me know that too... I find the Taiwanese people to be very much like children in certain ways... It's very endearing to be honest. Even criticism like that feels much softer because of the innocence with which it is delivered.
Funny thing is, they often ask what month I am...
I guess they are a little less used to generally porky guys...
I play up on it of course to make them laugh... If you relax the stomach muscles, you can really get quite a paunch going!
funny shot. You may want to consider cropping the bottom just where the boxers meet the jeans...the jeans and belt kinda distract from the overall image. I noticed when I scrolled how much better it looks with that bottom part in it. Nice lighting - no harsh shadows. Overall good skin tones. Now suck that belly in and go look sexy for your lady!
Now that's very funny. Good tones, but you should have perhaps matched the other shots and been neked (without revealing anything); the belt and underware detract from an artistically funny shot.