I like this composition, but the lighting seems harsh as it has left many distracting and disparate reflections and the shadows created by the bigger marbles are also a problem. As well, seems as if a greater DOF or better focus is required as the whole shot seems out of focus somewhat.
It's nice but diffusing the light source would have cut down on the many reflections of light, that vie for a attention along with the subjects. Because of the reflections it seems too busy.
Hope that helps!
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