I thought this seemed like a neat idea. The problem, for me, is that nothing is actually in focus.. except possibly the spot just below the bottom corner of the eye.
I can't make out what kind of wildlife 'Kim' is, but am guessing, as you have a name for it that it's not truly wild. A good idea to pick out a particular animal feature, but this would have been better too if the focus had been sharper.
I really don't think that you have maximised the potential of this shot. You should aim for 640 for one side. But on the other hand I don't know what I am looking at.
Looks out of focus to me. The composition doesn't engage me much. When shooting this much black, try to keep as much detail in the textures as possible, otherwise it all runs together.
The subject isn't wildlife in a natural setting...it's (I suppose) an eye of something wild although it seems like it's domesticated. It's hard to tell what this is but it looks like a cow which generally can hardly be regarded as wild.