If it was in sepia it would have a slight link with the title. I hope you were attempting to achieve a soft focus style, unfortunately it appears to be out of focus. The top would have been better cropped slightly lower to lose the highlight top-right.
the proximity of the lens to the subject together with the crop has given the legs and abdomen an unreal enlarged effect. It does not do the body justice. Also, the focus is off, and lighting flat, leaving this to be unappealing.
should I assume this is a tuck since the vagina rule was clear? assuming there's no DQ, I'll tell you the focus is either a bit soft or a bit sharp, depending on what you were going for. I'd have gone really sharp myself. the lighting is a bit weak, but again you may have done this for effect. be interested to see the comments at the end, although I won't likely get the chance. :)
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