Creative idea - like it a lot. The golden wrist-thing is a bit distracting though. Like to the face in the background but somehow annoying that the face is so red but the hand so white.
I have a nearly identical shot in my 'Signs' possibilites. Got the wife the flash you the sign like I did? Wasn't too hard as she hates modeling for me. I didn;t submit it because it was way better after some major dodging and burning - now my desktop! Insofar as the shot, I like it. Maybe a little more shadwoed lighting on the hand to create interest and the shadow across the eye is a little distracting. Good luck!
ROFL This is hilarious. You may get voted down, but I like it. Great DOF and the clarity of the hand is excellent. I usually don't like jewelry, but the bracelet adds to this to me. 9