The scar draws attention to itself, but I don't get the impression that it's supposed to be an important part of the shot. The item at the bottom right is distracting as well and some better lighting might have made this more interesting. I like the idea for the shot though, and I think the crop works well.
She has beautiful hands....(really) and he has had some serious surgeries! This is a cute idea for the composition. I just think moving the pillows and getting a better background would of enhanced your score. Not bad work in fact I like this and think it's very good.
Cannot figure out what's going on with the hands in the lower part of the picture! What in the world... ? I think I might like it better if the main model had both hands behind the back, letting the long-nailed hands be the only two visible. The concept of this is interesting though!
Oh, I really like this. What a beautiful composition and a wonderful feeling of connection! I don't usually put scores in comments but this one gets a 10 from me.
a good twist on an old idea. like the setup, but I'm not a big fan of the cluttered backdrop. Either a solid colour, or get enough depth of focus to blur it so it's not so distracting. I KNOW people are going to ask about the scar... great title too.