Very nice portrait. The face is very good--nice catchlights and expression, lots of detail, and good lighting. However, there seems to me to be too much negative space at the top of the frame. You might want to crop down to about 3/4" above the model's head. Also, there are some hotspots on the white shirt that you might want to tone down a little.
nice idea, color good, too much negative space on top therefore crop needs work, b&w good, nice light, nice dof, nice angle, nice texture, good portrait, overall just a nice piece
Good portrait, seems to be a bit too much space above his head, a slightly tighter crop may have helped. Nicely executed shot however as far as colour, DOF and exposure.
Too much space at the top. Too much space makes him appear short. I would think you would want this fellow to fill the frame, with his eyes on the third. Great expression, colors.
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