I think I understand what you were going for here but it gives the photo a doctored look to it. And I had to search for the subject...it wasnt immeditaly obvious with the soft focus on the right two subjects.
Good use of shallow DOF to isolate your subject. I would have preferred the whole face of the subject to be visible, but that is only my preference. Good luck
the focus on the woman on the far left brings out the differences between her and the other two people in a way that does not do good things for this shot; the difference is too stark. and while that can sometimes be good, it simply does not work in this case.
Cool idea but I'm really uncomfortable with the composition. I was about to mark it a 1 when I finally saw the girl on the left. It probably shouldn't be that hard :)