The focus is a little too soft for my tastes, but the boy's face really sticks out a lot. Great composition, not too busy but just right. Maybe rotate it slightly so the verticals are more vertical? Nice shot.
very nice image. i love it. the longer i look at it, the more i like it. it's quite soft, but it looks like it you might have intended it to be that way. i think with the mood of this image the softness actually works well. each person in the background adds to this too. the person on the phone, the woman sitting down, the mom, and the observer behind her. this is really nice. well composed candid.
Lovelyas almost everything ither than her face is OOF. It looks here as if you're using post-processing blurring instead of focus. That's ok but I shouldn't be able to detect it