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01/31/2006 07:02:28 PMPost actions
Very pleasant model..."Girl-next-door" look about her.
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01/28/2006 11:18:39 PMPost actions
I'm thinking you should have used a smaller appature to get her hair and fingers in focus. Good composition however. Nice soft B&W.
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01/28/2006 11:01:26 PMPost actions
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01/28/2006 11:42:59 AMPost actions
lovely work. The expression has just that subtle hint of knowing a secret.
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01/27/2006 08:50:30 PMPost actions
The composition is very pleasing and the lighting is well balanced.
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01/26/2006 08:21:51 AMPost actions
Again, it seems to be all in the eyes, well done.....
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01/23/2006 07:05:54 PMPost actions
Nice candid (at least I think it's candid). The monochrome/tint is perfect as is the shallow DOF, with the face in focus.
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01/22/2006 03:03:16 PMPost actions
A pretty good composition here, but the B&W lacks a certain focus and contrast that'd stand it out more. Lighting is ok, but there is a little too much shadow in the eyes and upper face, and the tonal range is too much in the mid-tones, with not enough whites and blacks complementing.
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01/21/2006 08:13:57 PMPost actions
Beautiful portrait. I like the shine off of the earring.
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01/19/2006 05:46:03 AMPost actions
Really nice use of DoF and tinted B&W to give it a nice warm feeling. I like this a lot.
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01/17/2006 06:10:42 PMPost actions
I almost passed over this one as average. But then the expression got my attention. - Nothing overly special, just a well managed focus/DOF. Your model seems to grab your attention with her eyes and face, and the pic only lets you see her. Very well done.
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01/16/2006 04:14:16 PMPost actions
I feel like this is cropped a little tight
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01/16/2006 10:14:45 AMPost actions
Nice pose! Focus on the face is little soft and eyes are too dark.
Light and focus in portrait must be on the eyes not the hand.
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