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To me, and I'm not an abstract affecianado, abstracts are about either color or pattern. Here the color is nice (I like that color blue) but monotone and the pattern is chaotic. I bet you would have done better by firing the shot in a more geometric fashion. I'm not saying to perfectly line things up, but perhaps have them all oriented vertically or horizontally, or have them progress in a pattern as the move across the canvas. |