Coffee and cigarrettes, quite the disgusting combination. Otherwise, the glare on the table is a bit distracting and I think you could benefit from a tighter crop.
geez, you are even more messy than me! ;) your table is great for this challenge, the feet under the glass add a nice touch. not a shot i would hang on my wall though. -- gr8photos (5)
yes, i can see through the glass. but i will penalise you for a boring, dark and generally poor quality photo. next time you try using some natural light and have something standing out or something to make it more interesting.
having just spent a few minutes searching for "naturmort" on the web I think I understand this - maybe - (most of the sites were in Russian). Could have a bit more crisp focus - some of the areas seem very soft. Nothing is really grabbing me in the shot though = 4
I'd comment, but you wouldn't like it. (O.K. I figured out something that wasn't mean) Flare in corner of table from window reflection. Photo 7 Creativity 3 Transparency 5 total 4
I wonder if I want to take another look at this picture. I don't think it gives me the motivation to come back, and that is very important. Try for more story next time.
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