DOF could have used another stop or two. One eye seems just too much out of focus to really sell the portrait, although compositionally it is wonderful. The hair blowing and the expression are very nice as well. The B&W conversion is lacking a little in the blacks, and looks just a little flat.
Nice capture of an adorable subject. I like her direct gaze. Nice crop and great POV. A bit blown out in her nose and her right cheek and the details are lost in her sweater. Her eyes are gorgeous.
To me this looks too NeatImaged - apologies if you didn't use it, it's just how it looks. Other than that, its a nicely composed B&W, the eyes are captivating.
For the most part, this is a great shot. My only complaint is the out of focus bangs/forehead. Not sure if that's a matter of depth of field or what, but somehow, since the rest of her face is in decent focus, it makes it look like there's some kind of smudge or something on the lens. Very out of place.
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