Composition - Well I'm gonna take a stab at the question that I think you're trying to ask. "What is that bright glowing thing up there?" I don't know if that's it, but maybe its another interpretation. At any rate, I think it meets the challenge. The concept is good. The lighting of this shot is really good. The overexposure of the streetlamp and the dim light on the street are very well done and balanced where one is not too dark and the other not too bright. The subjects pose is convincing too. Good work.
Technical - I think the only thing that kept this one from getting any higher is the motion blur of the subject. Meaning you should've just froze and took the picture midstep instead of walking. It could work as a motion blur if you made it look more intentional. It's kind of in the area where it's almost intentional looking, but not quite. Exposure and framing are right on in this shotl
Overall - pretty well done. Only one thing that I think the voters had to hammer you on, and I am pretty sure they did. But I think it is a pretty good picture. The focus issue will never die here. If you don't make it look sooooo obvious that you did this on purpose, voters will think you messed up. At least half of them I believe will think that when a picture isn't crystal clear. Good luck in the future challenges - Bob