Beautiful memory captured. The lighting on her is great, she is precious. I would have preferred a sharper focus on her face and maybe from just a slightly higher angle, of course that is only my opinion
A wonderful idea, but the lighting just doesn't work for me. Not enough focus on the child, too much of a red/yellow cast, and it's just a little too busy.
The size of the big green ribbon next to the girl is too distracting. Maybe if she was a little larger and the ribbon a little smaller it would work. Here it just seems to overwhelm the photo.