It may have been beneficial to have shifted slightly so the sun was not cut in half by that beam...unless that was the purpose of the photo? Showing the city covering up nature's beauty or something of the like?
Quite a cool cityscape in the relection but it took me a long time to find them. I'm wondering if cropping the lady and building on the right out would help. You really should rotate it to correct camera angle too
The lighting here is a bit troublesome. The reflections are not very obvious and take up too little of the picture. The other elements in the picture crowded it out.