Image was extremely low contrast, which I think may hurt your score. Just some adjustments on the contrast in your editing program may have given this a bit more punch.
This is a wonderful shot but I would have liked to have seen more contrast. Much more highlights and shadows needed and a lot less midtones. I would work on this one some more because you have the possibility of an incredible shot here! Good capture!
Your title is "innocence" and the children are having fun in the water, but the shot has a gloomy sort of look to it - partly from the black+white and partly from the low contrast. I'm not sure why you made this choice.
though there is the city in the background, the subject matter of the photo is entirely different. Would have made a great pic for an other challenge though
Very nice picture, nice moment with children and perspective on city; might have been even better in color; the right hand side seems a bit empty, maybe crop more closely
Nice amount of contrast - makes it misty, like a memory. Great use of space and flawless focus. Cute kids don't hurt neither! Good answer to challenge. Well done. Thanks.
Take the shot from a lower angle so the kids and the skyscapers almost blend into one another. Focus in closer, perhaps zoom in so you have kids take up a greater part of the picture. If you have a backlight (sun behind the kids), a silhouette of the kids can make an impactful image. Sorry, I have to give you a 4.
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