Over sharpened? Over corrected? How about looking up to someone poking their head out the window here or in another building. People in the city are always "hanging" out the window and talking to others below.
I love the perspective on this photo... It appears that the lighting is a little weak, however. I think that this shot may have been more vibrant at a different time of day. These colors look bright but the flat lighting isn't highlighting them very well... = 6 - jmsetzler
I think I'd probably like to see the view up of just the building, not including the scaffolding. Also maybe play with the contrast a little, it seems a little dark.