This is nicely shot - a very attractive photo with good focus and good composition. It didn't make me think of any questions, though. I suppose I could make some up (who are these girls? why are they here?) but the picture itself just didn't inspire me to them.
perfect exposure, sharpness, and focus. great mix of expressions! hmm, seems like th egirl on the far right is the only one really daydreaming - the rest look like they're intently watching something. second girl from the left is cute :) excellent group portrait.
I love this shot! The contrast between the three girls on the right of the frame and the one who is looking down instead of to the right is great! The window behind them is a little distracting...maybe next time you can adjust your f/stop to throw the distracting becakground out of focus completely. Nice work!
This shot is so awesome. I assume it is "set up" (meaning you told the "models" how to look, etc.) but even so, it looks natural. The girl on the far right, the one with the sponge bob hat makes this shot what it is. Great work!!!!!! 10
Love the tee shirt "Not the brightest crayons in the box, are we?" I bet they are all looking at a boy and wondering what in the world is he doing? Good tones. Perky.
Talk about Thrilled. I can tell they are excited about getting their pic taken. They are probably wishing you had never found DPC. Wonderful picture, has a lot of feeling and suspence. 9
The mood here reminds me of Virgin Suicides. The swing carries a weight of varying emotions, nicely depicted in the girls' body and facial language. No one seems convinced with whatever they are listening to... and the question is: what "crap" are they listening to? Nice and mildly angsty.
This is a classic shot. I wonder what the girls on the left are looking at, and I wonder what the girl on the right is thinking about. The long grass is a nice touch and the over-all countryish look of this is top-notch - 10
Very nice grayscale 'portrait' type shot. Each subject seems to convey a different thought or mood. Neat! (I like the jovial mood from the one on the right - certainly appears to be in her happly place during this shot)
I think this is pretty slick... I wonder what the girl on the right is thinking about that has her attention drawn away from wha the rest of the troop is looking at out of the frame... she looks like she is quite content with whatever the thought may be. Maybe her shirt just sums her up and there is no real thoght going on here :-)) This image has a \'dual\' set of unanswered questions since I sorta wonder what the other three are looking at, but that element doesn\'t seem to be as strong to me as what the single girl on the right is thinking about... Whatever the other three are looking at doesn't seem to be really grabbin their attention :)
+ I like the contract of one girl smiling contently while the other three are looking away with an expression of concern.
+ Looking out of the frame is uncomfortable, but I guess that's the goal.
- The only thing I don't like is the very strong white of the building in the background, but that is being picky.
This is a brilliant shot. Really on level with a modern Cartier-Bresson. The expressions are fabulous, your framing and exposure are flawless, and the viewer interest here is perfect. Generally I prefer studio-type shots, but when I see something this well done, I can't help but give it a 10. Congrats. This should be hanging in an art museum.
Well done. I could write a couple of paragraphs about what I like about this photo and still not be able to explain exactly what I mean. Maybe this will help. 9
beautiful photo! the facial expressions are great and i love the b&w. i love how one girl is looking in a different direction than the others...really sells the "daydream" aspect. good job!
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