The composition needs a little work. The choice of subject matter is ok. The image quality is a little below average. Could have been a little more creative. - 4
There is a candidness that overcomes some of the technical difficulties, but not quite enough to make it soar. I'll give it a neutral 5. Hope mama and baby came out fine.
realize a hospital room doesn't provide the most flattering light but this is awful. Mom looks positively yellow. And why not show her belly? If I didn't have the title to go by this woman could be in the hospital for any number of reasons.
I'm not sure whether you intended for the yellowish green colour cast to be present. It does give a feeling of sickness, being in a hospital. Hope she is ok!
this is a moment well-captured ... It is definitely an emotional look on the subject. I think a little color-modification would do wonders. Since the lighting is hospital-ish, there is a green/yellow cast that could edited. Very nice though.