In response to your request, here is an your in depth critique from the critique club.
This looks like a fun abstract photo. Definately fits the challenge of patterns.
The colors are awesome, very vibrant. This makes the photo very eye catching and definately gives it a measure of wow factor.
I can't decide if the focus works for me personally or not. One side of me likes how it's blurred around and almost appears to have motion, the other side of me wants to see a little bit more in focus. Right now, the crist focus is in the lower right portion of the photo and that's about it. The area that is in the most focus contains what looks to be some oversharpening, see the white lines. If this is part of the image, it still looks like oversharpening.
I like that you did not put the meeting point directly in the center of the photo. This creates some visual appeal as well. I like the way it kind of bursts out from the center point. The photo has real nice balance.
Overall, nice to look at and technically well done abstract.
~Heather~
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