Thanks all for your comments, I must say that this is my first shot and yes a new camera and forgot to take off the date stamp, only afterwards I realised this and well did not know how to take it off once taken so had to just leave it on.
I tried something I thought would come out well and from your comments its been good to see that I have the idea but just need alot more work, and yes it will come with time I hope.
Thanks again for the positives and negitives, its the only way we can learn.
Ahhh! You left some kind of stamp in the lower right corner of the frame! I like the idea here although it is verging on business. I'm wondering if a vertical format isoloating a single one of those lamp areas might have been more effective. I don't think the neon sign is adding much in terms of pattern.